Comments on: S&M Haiku

By: pink_twitch

pink_twitch — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 23:31:01 +0000

One kissed one plugged,

Asses and lips in full conjunction,

How appropriate in the autumn sky!

thank You.

By: theotherside

theotherside — Thu, 17 Sep 2009 06:18:14 +0000

Make THEM write haiku
Who needs seasonal references
When you’ve got a whip?

(This haiku works in most British English accents. It may not work in all American ones…but “seasonal references” has 5 syllables when I say it)

By: jamieM

jamieM — Thu, 17 Sep 2009 02:51:29 +0000

The searing hot pain,
a shrill scream ripped from his throat,
love is submission.

By: cynskasha

cynskasha — Thu, 17 Sep 2009 00:49:46 +0000

Crop, Hand, Clothespin, Clamp

My Skin Raw my Body Damp

This is my Pleasure

By: Dea

Dea — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 23:05:04 +0000

Squee! Wolfie, I adore it!

By: Wolffie

Wolffie — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 22:30:39 +0000

Ass, bare, upturned,
Inviting hot kisses and freezing whips
- hell freezes over.

By: knowmyplace

knowmyplace — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 21:29:27 +0000

Pain blooms in his eyes
Brought from within by Her whip
Slowly he forgets

By: just kickme

just kickme — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 19:37:58 +0000

Badly Beating Balls
Wicked Fists Knees Feet alike
He’s bruised and broken

By: Nikita

Nikita — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 18:59:32 +0000

Okay, here it is:

Offering

He gripped his ankles firmly

Uncut, thick, focused, filled, and fooled

Screaming that nothing was damaged.

By: Fly by Hai – Haiku Challenge « More Dirty Laundry

Fly by Hai – Haiku Challenge « More Dirty Laundry — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 18:42:59 +0000

[...] they had a grand old time teasing me about haikus. Domina Dea had posted a haiku challenge and encouraged me to post one too. I’m not a poetry kind of gal but I couldn’t [...]